Write descriptive, accurate sentences using capitals and full stops.
We explored the margaret mahy playground so we could find out, about the equipment we might want at our new school.
The one piece of equipment that I think was the best was the flying fox because, everyone is sharing and taking turns. The flying fox was orange and yellow. I think it would be safe as long as we can have mats, under them.
My second favorite thing was the gigantic slide because 6 people can go on it at a time. We can put little walls on the edges and put a rail on each side of the gigantic slide.
My last favorite thing was the spinning egg because when you sit in it you fell like the world is tipping.
I love the flying fox, the gigantic slide and spinning egg.
By Hayley H-B
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