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Tuesday, August 21, 2018

The Dragon Battle

My writing task was to write a narrative that had characters, a setting, a problem and a resolution.
Here is my story
Dragon Battle
By Hayley:)


Jess the ruler of The Kingdom Of The Dragons was sitting in the  great hall of Castle
Amberstone eating her tea that was massive chicken wings. Jess is a blue scaly dragon
with eyes like sapphires.


As she sat there she received a letter from Chillibreath the princess of The Kingdom Of
The Dragons. The letter arrived in an envelope with wings.


Chillibreath is a red dragon with a yellow chest. She has all sorts of jewels like diamonds,
Rubies, sapphires and emeralds. The letter said that Jess was to battle Chillibreath and
whoever won would become ruler. Jess sent a letter saying that she agreed.


So three days later the battle began. Most of the dragons in the kingdom came to watch.
Then the dragon battle started. Chillibreath used thunderstrike. Thunderstrike is where
big grey clouds come and shoot out lightning. But Jess was too fast. Chillibreath did a
nose dive but Jess made a magical net and Chillibreath bounced off the net. ¨Nooooooo
¨ Chillibreath yelled.


Everyone cheered that Jess won. Chillibreath flew up to Jess and asked if they could have
peace between them. Jess agreed and asked her maids to build a cave just out of the
Kingdom of The Dragons so chillibreath would not cause anymore trouble and so she
does not have to live in a cave that is cold, wet and damp. So everything went back to
normal and everybody went back to being happy even Chillibreath was stunned by her
new cave.

  

2 comments:

  1. Hi Hayley,
    Wow this is such a good story I cant wait to see you make it into a book I like the way you used such good descriptive words and how there was peace between them both. Maybe next time you could make the battle a bit longer and describe how chillibreath and Jess was feeling. This reminds me of the time were I was battling a creature on prodigy.
    -Shanae

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  2. Hi Shanae Its Hayley
    Thanks for the feedback! Yes maybe next time I could go back through and make that.

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