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Friday, June 15, 2018

Writing your own poem

Planning your own poem
Now write your poem here
TENDERHEART
By Hayley
Sea blue eyes, blonde hair, Pure white smile with tan skin
The sweet aroma of fresh fruit comes from her sweet breath
She moves so quickly you can´t see her
Her touch is like soft cotton candy or a kittens tummy
Leaves out gold hearts and love

Her voice is like soft sweet music and she barely talks

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  1. AdelaideJuly 25, 2018 at 2:14 PM

    Hi hayley,Adelaide here.I love your poem.It has a nice touch to it.maybe you could fix up the bit that is coming off the end.This reminds me of a time when I heard the name tenderheart

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