My Speed Power
There I was at school running the cross-country. I was still running when I
started to run a bit faster. I did not know what was happening to me. Just then
I past three of the fastest kids in the school. They were Jesse, Adelaide and
Shanae. Adelaide was amazed. She was probably thinking that I do not
usually run that fast. Jesse said that if I keep up that speed I will catch Zavier.
Just as he said it I did. My body felt like I was as light as a feather. I shot away
like a jet plane. I only had one lap to go and I thought to myself why am I not
tired? My running was so terrific. Miss McCormick could not believe her eyes.
After I was finished the race everybody was amazed. I was too. After school I
ran as fast as flash all the way home. My house was 15 miles away from the
school. Mum was amazed when I got home. When mum seen me she said
¨how did you get here so fast?¨ It was me running. I don't know what has
happened? So mum decided to take me to the doctors. But they did not know
what has happened to me. So we went home. In the car I found a snail.
So I picked it up and chucked it out the window. When we got home mum
started to cook tea. I told mum that I was going to run to the school and back. She said that I was allowed to go. I started running but I was not as fast as I was. I walked in and said to mum that I can't run fast anymore.
started to run a bit faster. I did not know what was happening to me. Just then
I past three of the fastest kids in the school. They were Jesse, Adelaide and
Shanae. Adelaide was amazed. She was probably thinking that I do not
usually run that fast. Jesse said that if I keep up that speed I will catch Zavier.
Just as he said it I did. My body felt like I was as light as a feather. I shot away
like a jet plane. I only had one lap to go and I thought to myself why am I not
tired? My running was so terrific. Miss McCormick could not believe her eyes.
After I was finished the race everybody was amazed. I was too. After school I
ran as fast as flash all the way home. My house was 15 miles away from the
school. Mum was amazed when I got home. When mum seen me she said
¨how did you get here so fast?¨ It was me running. I don't know what has
happened? So mum decided to take me to the doctors. But they did not know
what has happened to me. So we went home. In the car I found a snail.
So I picked it up and chucked it out the window. When we got home mum
started to cook tea. I told mum that I was going to run to the school and back. She said that I was allowed to go. I started running but I was not as fast as I was. I walked in and said to mum that I can't run fast anymore.
Mum said ¨That was the end of that!¨
Hi Hayley
ReplyDeleteIt is haylee from south hornby I like your story but at the end I don't think you should add pics of yourself because some stranger might come an look on here and see what you look like
Sometime ask your mum if we could have a playdate miss you bye
Hi Hayley.I really like your speed power story.Imagine if that was real.That would be super cool.Maybe next time you can add similies and adjectives to make it more cool.Bye
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