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Wednesday, November 9, 2016

My Family



Dylan, Mum, Rob, Cosmo, Brodie, Hannah.


I have a brother named Dylan. He is very annoying. He even distracts me well i’m doing my homework. Dylan is 6 yrs old.


My mum takes care of me. She pays for my swimming and my netball. My mum is 34 yrs old. I love her!!!


Cosmo is my cat. He is black and white. He eats cat biscuits for breakfast and meat for dinner. Cosmo likes to sleep on mum’s bed in the sun.


Rob is a truck driver. He Drives a VTL truck. Rob is going to become a dad soon. He has blue eyes.


Brodie is my cousin. He likes to what jurassic world. Brodie sometimes comes over to play at grandmas house to play with us. He is 7 yrs old.


Hannah is also my cousin. She likes to play with her dollies and shopkins.

6 comments:

  1. I love your story so much it is really good of how you did it.
    :)

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  2. I love your story.Instead of just saying the names you wrote about them and you didn't only just add people.Your cat seems cool.

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  3. Is your cat really 15.My dad's girlfriends cat died when she was 17 and they had to put her sleep and she was really sad.I was too because I loved that cat.

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  4. Hi Hayley
    It is me from your neighbour from Oriana Crescent it has been along time since I saw you does your mum still have our nana's number because if she does I can get nana to flick your mum a text for a playdate. I like how you have said your mum your little brother your two cosuins and your cat name.
    Haylee your friend

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